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Well this is not a Xmas pic like mostly of people but I wanted to work on a new version from my first original character´s pic with my current improved skills. Obviously fixing several mistakes that I made on the original version and adding some more context.

Of course I also wanted to get a more real situation where Molly must face the world with her figure catching stares from crowd and the possibly most common reactions.

That`s why I specially want you people to give your critiques about this pic not just comparing it with the previous version but the pic itself, you know, composition, technique, anatomy handling, idea impact, expression, etc. Anything you say will be much apreciated! :)

Thnx in advance!

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:iconmaddogmaster:
This upgrade is awesome, not saying the original wasn't, but I can see the changes made. Starting with the feet, in the original they seemed very narrow and slightly on the long side kinda similar to clown shoes while here they look perfectly proportionate. The chain holding up the one side of the pants was definitely a needed touch. Your originals pants just seemed to be floating with nothing keeping them up, so for the added chain I applaud. Holding the board behind her was definitely the way to go. Having her holding it to her side just seemed to put it out of place. And finally her breasts are much proportionate in comparison to the original. In the original her right breast only pressed out over the top where as here her arm is against her right breast and it is pushing out both the top and bottom of her arm giving it much better feel. I love the texture in the hair as well, and I couldn't help but notice the small set of breasts on the person's phone, get me alil chuckle. With all this said I give you a perfect score on the grounds that I absolutely love this piece as well as all of your pieces. Have a Merry Christmas my friend.
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First let me start by complimenting you, no artist who improves their skill-set doesn't look back and think THAT image would look great today. I think this holds true with this. Definite upgrade LOL. The first thing I see is the shear depth of it. From the main focus in the center to the characters in the distance and naturally the DOF mobile user in the foreground. But the details pop out to me. The graffiti on the wall for one. Then the texture of everything I like a lot it adds validity and REALITY to the whole scene. I like this a lot.
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killacam1982 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really like how her tank top is so detailed that you see the ripples in it. Also I really dig the background. Quick question. What cup size is she.
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mangrowing Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Hard to say... I dont know too much about bra sizes.
Anyway cups vary regarding countries, so that makes it even more confusing to me.
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killacam1982 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ahhh is cool. Shes better without a bra anyway. Lol.
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serginho3000 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
Very cool
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Shinkarchuk Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
WOW!!
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vaako-7 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
Holy cow, this is gorgeous! 
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Dollarfifty Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
This has got to be my favorite image on all of deviantart! Great job!
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mangrowing Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thnx :)
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Dollarfifty Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
No prob! You deserve it!
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AgentDee Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
I LOVE it dude, very nice!
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